you got me in a choke-hold.
Hold.
choke.
choke more.
check me.
life line.
check mate.
Hold.
choke.
choke more.
check me.
life line.
check mate.
hate blind
cursed fate
fake case
suffa cate.
catch phrase
e rase
caught breath
brain dead
dread lock
lock down.
down cold
choke hold.
fake case
suffa cate.
catch phrase
e rase
caught breath
brain dead
dread lock
lock down.
down cold
choke hold.
11 comments:
Deep.
thank u :)
I like this,
it's original and deep!
belated thanx!!!
nice one !
@eeda
hey i can't view your idylic illusions ... ?? whats wrong with it ??
Good work, Eeda.
@ mehreen...thank u!! sorry i only just saw ur comment :S
quite deep, and straight to the point, really gets the message across.. =]
I tried to view your other two blogs but since I'm not an invited reader, I'm not - well, invited.
-_-'
Anyway. I can sing this poem-thing over a guitar. Sounds good to me.
That's because I'm so awesome.
@ayla
thanx for dropping by! im glad u liked it!! :)
@mehreen..replied to u on ur own blog..have a lookie!
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